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College Essay Guru

When writing your college supplements, you will almost certainly come across the “Why this college?” essay in many forms. For example, Stanford asks you to “Name one thing you are looking forward to experiencing at Stanford” in 50 words, while Columbia asks “Please tell us what you value most about Columbia and why” in 300 words.

Colleges ask this questions for two reasons. First, to find out your demonstrated interest, because the more students that enroll after being accepted, the better the college looks. Second, it’s an easy way to weed out unserious candidates. The biggest mistake you can make is copying and pasting the same essay for each college. If you think it’s as easy as substituting College Name 1 with College Name 2, you’re doing it wrong.

The “Why this college?” supplement is one of the hardest essays to answer. Ideally, you would’ve visited the campus, researched the school, and spoken to former alums to really know the answer. But not everyone has the privilege (or money) to travel to see schools, Luckily, I have some shortcuts for you, right this way.

1) The Campus Visit

The college tour is the golden standard to reference in these supplements. It shows the most demonstrated interest (link) and also gives you the best reference if this college is the right fit for you. It might even help you narrow your list - sometimes stepping foot on campus right out of the car is all you need to know to feel nope, not for me. When you’re there, be sure to take notes on everything you see and hear and get business cards too just in case. These notes will be crucial in helping you come up with a more unique answer than just something you’d find on the website. (For more tips on nailing the campus visit, click here.)

2) Speak to Former Alums

Getting the perspective of current or former alums is worth more than any brochure. Maybe you’re too embarrassed to ask your real questions at the campus visit or you think the answer wasn’t real enough. An alum not connected to the admissions team has no reason to lie to you. Ask your counselor to connect you with anyone who went there recently. If that doesn’t work, reach out to your network. Facebook and LinkedIn make this super easy. Or search to see if any reps will be coming to a campus fair near you. 

3) Research The School

Find out the majors, extracurriculars, professors, etc that would excite you about the school and reference them by name, so you’re not just spouting off generic stats. Saying you have the greatest professors is not as meaningful as saying you can’t wait to study Russian literature with Professor Stanton, for example.

4) Stalk The College’s Social Media 

This is key. Remember that each campus has a brand and you need to figure out a way that you fit into that brand. The college’s social media presence is a great way to discover how the college speaks about itself, what it prides about itself to boast on Facebook, and most importantly, the insider slang it uses to refer to itself or its students. Cornell students are Cornellians. Columbia is known for its Core.  University of Michigan students are proud Wolverines. You get the idea!

College Essay Workshops

Writing noteworthy essays for college is one of the most important components of the application process. The essay is an opportunity to showcase your unique qualities, while making a meaningful connection with the college admission committee. The personal narrative is often a new form of writing for high school students and can be intimidating or confusing. Practice and professional instruction can help students create exceptional essays. 
 
This three-day workshop will help students understand the essay in context of the application, and lead them through the process of brainstorming content, drafting, editing, and refining. It will be taught by Erika Dietz, the founder and leader counselor of Guru Academic Advising. She has many years of admissions experience, teaching experience, and counseling experience. In 2013 she synthesized these skills and diverse experiences to launch Guru Academic Advising which has fast become one of the highest quality, most successful, and most ethical college counseling services in the North Texas area. 
 
Who can attend? This is designed with rising senior students headed into the college application process in mind, but rising sophomores and juniors are welcome, too – younger students will benefit from learning to write in this narrative style and can use the essays they compose to start the process of applying to outside merit-based scholarships. Rising seniors will draft an essay that can be used on their upcoming college applications.
 
When is the workshop? 
June 12, 13, 14 from 9 - 11am--- CAMP IS FULL. If you would like to be notified if/when we open a second option, please fill out this form. We also offer one on one sessions, and you can request a consultation to learn more about that option.
 
What does it cost? $200 (invoice will be sent via email within 24 hours of filling out the form below)
 
Where will it be held?Trietsch Memorial United Methodist Church in Flower Mound

Feedback from the College Essay Workshop: 
      "Thank you so much for offering this class!!  Gabi was very excited about sharing her essay with me when she came home yesterday, and I
      was impressed with what she came up with.  I'm excited she is getting a head start on thinking about what to write about and how to make
      it interesting. Thank you!!!!"

      "Thank you Erika for putting this on for the kids - Sydney loved it! She came home both days telling me all about it. Cute pics too, thank you
      for sharing those."

​      "I just want to thank you for the essay workshop! Jacob said it was great and he struggles with writing so this is a good start to get the ball
      rolling." 

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